Running On A Treadmill Underwear How Twisted Does This Story Sound?
How twisted does this story sound? - running on a treadmill underwear
I am writing my first novel about a group of psychopaths (child molesters, it's the mafia, poachers, arsonists and people who are cruel) to animals, the bitter taste of own medicine. First, we will humiliate them. Neo-Nazi/skinhead a guy is a homophobic, the two gay men killed. He was tied to a chair for a gay cowboy, you have to play a round of dancing to the song "Hot Stuff" by Donna Summer too. The child molester has size adult diapers, pacifier sucking bear shaking a baby rattle in one hand and a teddy bear in another. Meanwhile, they play "Rock-A-Bye Baby" and bombarded him with water balloons. The guy who runs dogfighting should wear underwear, but nothing from Scooby Doo, a dog-eared baseball cap and sneakers dogleg. The executioners are joined him and pUll around through the loop. He even made his knees and eating Alpo Dog Bowls. They make women wear costumes fat treadmill run while playing the song "Physical" by Olivia Newton-John. Speed bands gradually, while the other joins the scorn and mocked them. How about this idea?
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I think it's best to make a short story than a novel, although I like the idea anyway. I personally believe that the penalty would still be difficult, but it's just my way of cold stone. p
Have you ever by Paul Jelling? He was (my favorite and very popular in Australia) authour for children who wrote these novels with dark humor, Twisted Tales.
As far as I know, nothing like it for adults, if I like the idea!
You have to look at some of his belongings. (It is not so much focused on morality, and his style is probably very different, but the nature and the atmosphere that I see is the same)
* Edit: * Shanna is a good idea to get easily bored, but I think to keep the shortening of the history of the rapid than the rulethis problem. I agree with its "clear concern of morality, though.
Sometimes, if the story is too complicated, readers in the prone position, the image you want to see, or to absorb feel. Worse, they throw witer be that only after attention.
I had only known ...
Talk to the person who is the disgrace for him, and whenever you have a good story. IRIS, but interesting, and if we take seriously, a very good book which can be very popular.
Umm definitely its something else lol
but when completed and published, it would certainly buy and read to know what in the end.
good luck:) lol
Hmm ... This is strange. Vaguely amusing. But strange.
Its disgusting, totally inhumane ....................... PERFECT
I think it sounds pretty twisted .. But would a good novel. A novel very twisted!
What is the argument?
If that's all that happens, there is really no conflict and very quickly become repetitive and not many people of interest. Add a bit of conflict / Climax, etc., and could have a guess. This is not really something I would say that, even if it revenge on those who have crimes committed but not by sinking to their level of being, so I do not teach them something after reading. Good luck if you need assistance, please contact me.
Well, this is her first novel, a story of horror comedy? From what you write for readers who laugh before shivering in bed at night, one page in the application of terror.
It will be different if one of Clive Barker LA, only the horror would be fun!
Good luck with it.
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If you are interested in the medieval torture practiced by people terribly painful, I can give many details. Torture and death penalty (forms) are a specialty of mine. No joke!
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